Score: 10

"Beautiful!"

submission: Colour My World

date: October 18, 2009

~~~Good Points~~~
~ The background was very well made
~ The animation and controls were done very well, were smooth and easy to get a hang of
~ The music was beautiful
~ The message at the end was brilliant
~ The whole thing was just packaged together nicely and gave me a nice warm fuzzy feeling.
~ The signs were done very well and the messages were deep and emotional.

~~~Bad Points~~~
~ What I could see was that the jumping onto platforms was quite glitchy at times. I would almost make it....Then suddenly appear on the platform.

~~~Improvements~~~
~ Fix the jump

~~~Other Comments~~~
~ I never thought a flash could be this beautiful. I wasn't expecting it....But then along came the ending and I got goosebumps.
~ This must have taken you a while, and it looks like it paid off.
~ This flash is very touching.

~~~Overall~~~
~ Man....If I could feel emotional pain, I would possibly cry at this. It is so deep, and the messages on the signs were emotional and like I said...Very deep.

Keep up the good work my friend.

Lizzardis

Score: 10

"Very very well made!"

submission: T E T R I S ' D 2

date: October 4, 2009

~~~Good Points~~~
~ The animation was flawless
~ The music was brilliant
~ It was so smooth and was synced very very well!
~ It was a brilliant concept to base a flash around
~ Kept me hooked throughout!

~~~Bad Points~~~
~ N/A

~~~Improvements~~~
~ N/A

~~~Other Comments~~~
~ When I watched the first one....I didn't think it could get any better. I have watched this one, and you have exceed my expectations!
~ This was a brilliant flash, I can't wait for the game! Will it have medals for statwhores like myself? Haha.

~~~Overall~~~
~ This flash was very well made and blew me away. The first one was good....This one was brilliant!

Keep up the good work!

Lizzardis

Score: 10

"Very very irritating!"

submission: Narwhals

date: September 16, 2009

~~~Good Points~~~
~ The song is brilliant!
~ The animation is just amazingly done
~ The switch between scenes is smooth and quick
~ Such a brilliant yet very strange context 0.o
~ The full-screen feature and the fact you had subtitles was brilliant!

~~~Bad Points~~~
~ No pause/stop button
~ IT LOOPS! AAAH!

~~~Improvements~~~
~ N/A....I know you didn't add a pause or stop button and made it loop just to annoy us....Crafty little bugger! :P

~~~Other Comments~~~
~ Although this got VERY irritating after a while, I was a superb flash and everything was just awesome.

~~~Overall~~~
~ I thought this flash was amazing. Everything about it was just top. You put it out to entertain AND THEN annoy us and it defiantly did work!

Keep up the good work Weebl and gang!

Lizzardis

Score: 10

"Its been a while since I got goosebumps..."

submission: Stamp on the Ground

date: September 16, 2009

~~~Good Points~~~
~ The animation was perfect for this type of flash
~ The scene changes to and from different characters were brilliant
~ The song was amazing
~ It was amazing how you made something so simple as dancing into a brilliant flash animation!
~ It was very well synced
~ It was VERY cute!

~~~Bad Points~~~
~ N/A. I can't see anything wrong with this

~~~Improvements~~~
~ N/A. Heh, nothing here either

~~~Other Comments~~~
~ Like the title said...I got goosebumps watching this, I have no idea why. Maybe its because they all looked so happy along together....I don't know.
~ It looks like you worked hard on this. You should be proud of what this is!

~~~Overall~~~
~ Overall I thought this was a superb flash. Very entertaining to watch and i have added it to me favourites!

Keep up the great work!

Lizzardis

Score: 6

"It could use some more effort!"

submission: F L i G H T

date: September 16, 2009

~~~Good Points~~~
~ The context of the flash was interesting
~ I did see that you put a lot of effort into this and the message behind the flash was very well done
~ The shading was quite good too!
~ A very nice preloader!
~ The music was brilliant!

~~~Bad Points~~~
~ The attention to detail I thought was a bit off
~ The voice was sort out...Out of place.
~ The guys walking was very strange! 0.o
~ The storyline got a tad confusing.

~~~Improvements~~~
~ Give the background and the character much more detail
~ Try and fit your voice to where you are, E.G. You wouldn't sound like you were stood in your kitchen if you are in the desert
~ Fix the guys walking stances
~ It would have been nice if you could add some subtitles next time, as said before...The voice acting wasn't the best

~~~Other Comments~~~
~ I did like this flash, however some major improvements are needed

~~~Overall~~~
~ Overall I think you worked hard on this, however I find it hard to see how it paid off. Sure the flash's context is very good, but it was quite hard to understand, and the attention to detail was somewhat lacking.
~ I'd suggest improving this quite a lot. Then I'm sure it will be very good!

Lizzardis

~[Review Request Club]~

Score: 7

"Duuun dun digga digga dun duuun!"

submission: Otakuhell At Animefest 09

date: September 16, 2009

~~~Good Points~~~
~ The music was brilliant!
~ The writing moved about pretty well and was a nice touch

~~~Bad Points~~~
~ There wasn't as much "animating" as I expected from a music video
~ It was quite short

~~~Improvements~~~
~ Improve the animations, add backgrounds etc etc
~ Make it longer!

~~~Other Comments~~~
~ I found this flash, along with the music, to be very funny!

~~~Overall~~~
~ Overall, I'm not expecting you to go away and work on this, as its only a "flier to promote a live show." However, with that being said, I apologise for the small review...As there just wasn't much to work with.
~ I did like this flash though, even with the lack of animation. Or maybe its the music I like?

Lizzardis

~[Review Request Club]~

Score: 5

"Could use a lot of work"

submission: Mac, PC, and a Hedgehog

date: September 16, 2009

~~~Good Points~~~
~ The concept of the idea was quite good
~ The flash itself was funny
~ The voices were pretty well done!

~~~Bad Points~~~
~ The animation was quite bad I thought
~ The actual drawing of the characters was rough and could have done with more work
~ The arms were not attracted correctly
~ Everything could have had a lot more detail on it
~ The lips were too big and changed sizes far to often

~~~Improvements~~~
~ I think you should work more on the animation side of things first. Making it smoother, adding more detail and working on the various other things said above
~ You could also spend a lot more time on the actual drawing of the characters, as they are the main part of the flash.

~~~Other Comments~~~
~ I thought this was quite funny, however I was put off by the amount of flaws in this flash

~~~Overall~~~
~ I think that working on the flash for a longer period and paying attention to detail would make this flash much better. I did love the humour in it though and think that you should make another one.
~ If you do, be sure to think about what I said above in the "improvements" section!

Lizzardis

~[Review Request Club]~

Score: 10

"Not a bad game!"

submission: Pizza City

date: September 16, 2009

~~~Good Points~~~
~ I love 8 Bit games like these!
~ When turning the perspective of the car was brilliant
~ The controls were easy to get the hang of however....(See "Bad points")
~ The missions weren't too long. Sure they were an effort, but they were fun nonetheless!
~ The little side missions and the fact you could buy new cars was great!
~ Plus the fact you made it feel like Grand theft auto, was just amazing.

~~~Bad Points~~~
~ (Continued from "Good points") However the controls were VERY out of control sometimes. Meaning that it was hard to handle the car.
~ The music got very annoying at times (I know there is a mute button)
~ I got quite boring

~~~Improvements~~~
~ Improve the car's controls somewhat

~~~Other Comments~~~
~ I really liked this game, it was quite for for quite some time. However like I said above...It does get rather boring. I think its because of the whole "8 Bit" thing....That gets boring after a while.

~~~Overall~~~
~ Overall I did think this was a great flash. It was made well, and its just what I expected from an 8 bit game. Sure there were flaws, but even in the best of games there is BOUND to be some!

Lizzardis

~[Review Request Club]~

Score: 8

"It was alright"

submission: Headlights On Dark Roads

date: September 15, 2009

~~~Good Points~~~
~ The animation was OK
~ The song was good
~ It was a good length
~ Loved the effects of the blue and the preloader!

~~~Bad Points~~~
~ The animation was quite bad in some places...
~ The car crash did not look right
~ The perspective that I saw of some parts of the animation was wrong.

~~~Improvements~~~
~ I would improve the animation in some places...It seemed rough.
~ When he was playing the guitar....His thumb should have been on the INSIDE of this hand
~ I would also work on the car crash as it didn't seem right, then just flipping over one another.
~ Also, when the character was leaning with the music...It looked like he was about the fall over, because he was 2D. Maybe add a bit of depth to him
~ While we are on the subject, you -could- add more detail to him as....he is just blue

~~~Other Comments~~~
~ I'm not a fan of Snow Patrol, however I found that with this animation, the song sounded quite good.

~~~Overall~~~
~ I think that once or if the improvements are made, it will make the animation much better. However, I actually did like this animation even with the amount of flaws. I see you worked hard on this, and for what its worth....Its pretty good!

Lizzardis

~[Review Request Club]~

Score: 9

"OMG THIS IS TOO RUSHED?!?!"

submission: Resident Shittits 5

date: September 15, 2009

~~~Good Points~~~
~ Like most other users have said, thanks to the flash being rushed, it causes you to pay for attention, that was a good thing.
~ The animation was pretty sweet, it reminded me of the Metal Gear Aersome series
~ The story line was good.
~ The change in-between the scenes was nice and quick.

~~~Bad Points~~~
~ In some places the voices were hard to hear
~ I thought the lack of music or sounds was a downfall...I would have expected some
~ Also I know this was supposed to be rushed and I'm probably just being a perfectionist, but I thought that a little more attention to detail with the backgrounds would have been nice, plus just putting a background in various places instead of it just being white.

~~~Improvements~~~
~ Improve the voices
~ Put in better sounds/music (If possible)
~ Improve a tad on the backgrounds.

~~~Other Comments~~~
~ I did find this quite funny, however I didn't play the Resident games so I can't feel your pain. The only thing I ask is that you vent your frustration more! xD

~~~Overall~~~
~ I thought this was a great animation. Like I mentioned before, it reminded me a hell of a lot of the Metal gear awesome series. I think that with a few minor changes, this flash will be perfect for the "rushed" category!

Well done!

Lizzardis

~[Review Request Club]~